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Roothawg
12-09-2003, 09:05 PM
We all met at the Bell gas station East of town.

We had put a lot of thought into the grand scheme. This should work. Why wouldn't it?
As I loped into the parking lot in my old 36 Ford pickup with my girl sitting next to me, I saw Brent and Terry parked around back. I pulled around, shut off the motor and climbed out of the truck.
Hey man, are ya'll ready? "Yeah", Brent said. I'll meet ya back here in 15 minutes. "OK", I replied and walked back to the truck, fired it up and rumbled out of the parking lot with Brent following behind.

Downtown they were gathered in front of the Save-a-Stop, all of the town heroes and their groupies. Their machines... all polished and waxed to a high luster.
People milled around telling stories of their triumphant quests on the streets, forgetting to tell of the defeat they may have suffered as well.

The plan should work, if they take the bait.
The bait? "Yeah...they'll take it" I thought to myself.

As I rumbled through downtown in low gear, the 4.11's in my 57 Chevy rearend made the 327 sing out through the 18 inch glasspacks. Never raising the throttle above 3500 rpm. Just let her sing. One pass through town should be sufficient. Yeah...just one.

As I left town, I took the back roads hoping to not draw a lot of attention to my whereabouts. I circled back and pulled up behind the Bell gas station where I had met Brent earlier. I told my girl to sit tight in the truck til I got back. I jumped out of the truck and into his new Camaro.

We headed downtown to see if it had worked. It must have...the town was buzzing with curiousity about the new guy that had just cruised down Main Street.

The theories reminded me of the JFK conspiracy. Everyone knew the mystery guy, where he was from and who he was after. My buddy Brent, was a local, he was my insider.
Terry, was also somewhat known in the area, since he had relatives that were from there. They had no idea we were friends though.

I just hung out in the back of the crowd listening....learning.

The local hero wasn't scared, or so he said. He knew what he had in his motor and he wasn't afraid to pop the hood and tell the buzzing crowd all about it. He went into explicit detail. He told of all the modifications he had made to the engine. All of his deepest, darkest speed secrets. After assessing the situation I spoke up.
"What makes you think you can beat that guy?" I asked.
One of his groupies spoke up for him,"Because, the Duncan Brothers own the salvage yard and they get all the good parts!" "Oh...I see.", I replied.
"Hey who are you?" The groupie asked.
Me? Nobody........

I guess that was sufficient enough to satisfy the small mental capacity of the follower...so, he wandered off, close in tow to his hero.

"Hey!" Terry yelled out. I know the guy and I'll bet you a hundred bucks you can't take him. The local hero stopped in his tracks.He spins around looking stunned "What did you say?" he spouts.

Terry says again, "You can't take him and I have a 100 that says it's so. "You meet us out on the Chickasha highway at midnight and we'll see who comes out on top" says the town hero.

We'll be there.....Terry answers.

The side bets were going crazy. Everyone was stacking the odds in his favor. After all, The Duncan's had a 1967 390 powered Cougar and a 4 speed to top it off. He had never been beaten in that car since it's completion, not much of a feat in a town of 6500. Nonetheless, he was the reigning world champion driver round these parts.

I caught a ride with Brent back to the truck where the girfriend was sitting with that"Where have you been?" look on her face. I pulled in behind Brent and followed him out of town and onto the deserted stretch of road they called the Chickasha highway.

I started to see black marks as we approached the perfect stretch of road. It had an oilfield access road on both ends of the quarter mile. This is where the cars started to congregate. Soon the cars lined both sides of the highway waiting for the climactic finish of a Saturday night.

I saw the Cougar coming through the sea of headlights. He inched up to the primitive starting line and waited. I rolled off the access road and lined up next to him. I told my girl to get out and hold the money at the other end to keep everyone honest.

At this point, they still hadn't made the connection that I was the stranger in the crowd. My 36 had smoke gray windows so it was hard to make out great detail on things such as facial features and more importantly..... identities.

Once my girl had collected all of the bets at the finsih line, they flashed their headlights to let us know they were ready. I guess they figured that any guy that would put his girl up for collateral wouldn't possibly run off with their money. They had no idea that I would have traded her for a good carburetor, at the drop of a hat.

I started the 36 and revved her up just for a little atmosphere music. His 67 roared to life as he turned on his lights. It was a full moon overhead, and it lit up the highway in an eerie shade of blue. His brother would be the flagman.Then the most bizarre thing happened he opened the trunk of his car. Uh oh....is he turning on the bottle? Nope, his brother returns with a jug in his hand. He pours out an unidentifiable liquid onto the ground in front of his brother's tires. Now, these are street tires, not wrinkle walled slicks. He does a burnout that would make John Force proud. "Man, I may be in trouble" I think outloud. Then his brother taps on my window. "You want some earl?" He asks me ina thick Oklahoma accent. "Uh...what?" I reply. "Earl...ya know, used earl makes em tires sticky."
"No thanks" I told him ....not believing what I had just heard. Using used motor oil for a tire additive....could I get this lucky?

I'll flag ya....when the flashlight comes on...ya'll go.

OK, I'm ready...fire at will. I popped off.
I rolled down the driver's window just far enough that I could give the old hero a wink. His jaw dropped as the lightbulb over his head came on. I brought up the rpm's while footbraking it. I could effectively hold the 36 to about 3500 and then she would creep.

He brought up his rpm's, with the clutch depressed, still looking over with a dazed look on his face. The flashlight comes on, the 327 screams to life as the r's start to climb.
He dumps the clutch on the Cougar and we are off!!
5500....5800....6500...I look up in the mirror and I see his headlights pointing off to the left. He's sitting still!! Oh, it's impressive to the groupies, the John Force burnout continues.

I grab second and see him gaining in the mirror. It's hard to judge the distance but I am taking no chances. I hammer on...no mercy. I grab high gear and push the rusty spoon pedal to the floor. I streak through the mass of cars on both sides, looking for that spray painted stripe accross the road. Finally , I cross the line with the Cougar well behind. The locals start running up to the truck screaming their take on the race. "6 Carlengths!" "8 carlengths!!"
The distance got greater each time the story was told.
I kicked open the passenger door and yelled at my girl "GET IN!!"...She jumps in , I flogged the throttle again. "We gotta get out of here...before those mental giants figure it out!" The pipes bellowed and we disappeared in to the distance. There is a 2 part moral to this story. There is always someone faster and they are always willing to take your money.

flamedabone
12-09-2003, 09:47 PM
Bitchn story, Root.

..and thanks for not gettin whupped by an old guy in this one..I was beginning to lose faith..

See you at the Drags, -Abone.

Roothawg
12-09-2003, 10:11 PM
No problem A bone. You gotta win some of em. http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif

Roothawg
12-09-2003, 10:41 PM
BTW, sorry it is so long....

I like the sound of that. http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/shocked.gif

fordiac
12-09-2003, 11:03 PM
not long enough! well maybe its just right!

i was wide eyed the whole time. great story. thanks alot.

thats coming from a 21 year old who can only dream of times like what you write about. I love as many and as much of these stories as i can get. it lets my inmagination run wild.

Toqwik
12-09-2003, 11:11 PM
Great story, Brings back memories.........

roadstar
12-09-2003, 11:32 PM
Daaaang Root! Ya make it seem like I was there. Great read.

JimC
12-10-2003, 12:07 AM
Chris, We gotta get you a pen name.

Keep EM coming.

Jim

sodbuster
12-10-2003, 01:09 AM
Great story Root. Brings back memories of not being able to go back to certain towns in south-east Kansas when I was in High School. Your story's are up there with 40stude's

Chris Nelson
Kansas

Are they going to be the Tuesday night read?

Tman
12-10-2003, 01:39 AM
NICE

Stone
12-10-2003, 03:24 AM
awesome story.

Roothawg
12-10-2003, 07:21 AM
Thanks guys. http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif

Mai Ki-Ki
12-10-2003, 07:48 AM
Beautiful...

After reading that and watching"gone in 60 seconds" tonight..ive decided a fast car is something i need.
Nevar had one..only cruisers..the next one will be i promise me.

Cheers
MAIKI http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/crazy.gif

Kustm52
12-10-2003, 09:40 AM
Damn root, where you been hiding all this story telling talent? Cool story....and you did a great job putting it in words. I've been there, from the crowd talking about the new guy in town to watching the race...but never the one in the race. Thanks for the rememories....

Brian

C9
12-10-2003, 09:46 AM
Great story Root.
A fun read.
A bit educational with the 'Earl' and all.
That's one 'Speed Secret' I'm glad I never learned....

However, I'm gonna give you a piece of advice whether you want it or not.
Not about the story and not about the writing.

About you....

You're a smart guy as shown by your many posts on many subjects on the HAMB.

Don't start the story out by titling it with an apology.
You have nothing to apologize for.
Don't comment on the length either.
The troops will read it or they won't and length has nothing to do with it.

Roger's Friday night reads were a good example.
There were several pages to all of them and far as I could tell no one complained about the length.
And like Carol King said, "Leave em asking for more."
Which he did.

The mark of a good story - in my opinion - is whether or not the reader wishes it were longer.
There were several comments made in that vein on both of your stories.
That should tell you that you're on the right track.

To get off on a tangent a touch - it relates directly to your comments - a mind is very much like a computer.
If you tell it you can't do something, it won't be long until you won't be able to do that particular thing and learning about it will be tough.
Contrary to what some think, your mind retains every bit of information it's ever been exposed to.
Sometimes you can't drag it to the fore, but it is there.
The subconscious remembers the instructions you gave it when you tell yourself that you can't do something or you're not very good at it.

So - nuff o' dat and realize that you're a good writer and I think you have a lot of stories within you that will come out and all of us will enjoy them.
I did and I'm looking forward to the next one.

50mercfan
12-10-2003, 09:49 AM
thanks root, that sure brings back a few saturday nights at midnight in the mid 80's. midnight is when the sherrifs department changed shifts and it took about an hour. we had a strong pontiac contingency and they were usually the cars to beat, but the mopars were cars to be continded with also. i met my wife there, the car is long gone but she's still here. thanks again, great story.

Roothawg
12-10-2003, 09:58 AM
C9, thanks for the encouragement. I really had never tried to do this before. These were the first 2 stories I have ever sat down and written out.

Sometimes, the Hamb can be almost intimidating because of the large volume of preofessional artists,writers,metalmen etc. So, I tend to try and let people know ahead of time that I am not trying to be a "pro" I guess. I agree with you about the positive attitude and after I re-read what I had written, I should edit the post title. I really like the cultural aspect that the Hamb brings into my life. There are a lot of talented people on this board. Thanks for the comments.

G V Gordon
12-10-2003, 12:10 PM
Great read Root,
You got a knack for tellin' a tale. Makes me want to dust off some of my old stories, 'course they would be a bit more "dusty" than yours seeing as they have been laying around longer. http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif
Keep up the good work. Bet you dad has a few to share, maybe he'd let you relate a few here.
Later,
George

Petejoe
12-10-2003, 12:31 PM
Great story, You need to keep telling them. I envisioned being on the sidelines watching the whole story unfold!
Thanks

raven
12-10-2003, 12:52 PM
Great story Root.
It brought back many memories of my 'mis-spent' youth.
Of course one could just say that it was 'training'...
Thanks for the read.
r

JimC
12-10-2003, 01:13 PM
Chris, I re-read your two stories.

I have re-read the commentsabout them.
If I was the author of your stories, I would feel real proud of their acceptance.

Jay's comments were right, in my thinking.

I wondered out loud to myself, after the re-read, Damn Boy, where have you been!

When I look for a book, fiction or otherwise, I scan the pages and read bits from several.
I buy the one that the writter held my attention and created the desire for me to read further
That, you did.

A literary critic I aint.But, I could read your stuff time and time again.

Jim
PS. That ability to tell a story, is probably why I bought the Coupeydoo.
Jim

Jester
12-10-2003, 01:33 PM
I don't want you to think I'm writing just to write but your stories are very good. As you have said there are alot of professionals on HAMB artist writers and business people. Me, I'm a brain stormer and here is one for you root COMIC BOOKS. With the artistic talents here and your story telling why not combine them. Just another stupid idea from someone who has nothing but stupid ideas.

Roothawg
12-10-2003, 01:35 PM
HAMB comic books? Hmmmmmmmmm.......that would be too cool.
Everyone already has a screen name.

TomH
12-10-2003, 02:22 PM
Man..... do you bring back memories. I feal like i'm 20 again!!

quickrod
12-10-2003, 11:02 PM
i love this kinda shit man!root, way kool story man,reminds me of stories my pops tells from time to time.....kinda makes me wish i grew up back in the late 50's early 60's when racing was kool and cars were kooler.{at least in my opinion}fun read,thanks!...quickrod http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif

Jkustom
12-11-2003, 12:33 AM
Hey man. That story put me in a good mood at the end of a bad day. thank you.

And if ya dont mind, keep em coming! -J.

Roothawg
12-11-2003, 08:59 AM
I don't know how many more I can do. My life experiences were pretty limited so the stories may kinda sound the same. I may have to start tapping into my dad's memories.

lil mike
12-11-2003, 01:42 PM
Root, that story is like what I tried to do in Sulfer with some friends, except my story almost ended up in a fist fight instead of a race! The locals were driving daddy's car and when he found out he tried to fight me.

Either way you story is awesome!

Pist-n-Broke
12-11-2003, 10:58 PM
Damn Man- That's Good stuff. Reminds me of the Henry Gregor Felson books from the early 50's. You had me leaning forward while reading like I used to do when racing. I'm one of the lucky ones to have actually lived in the times most are trying to re capture. Fortunatly I still have my high school hot rod that started out with the Flat Motor and 4 carbs. It's been resting for a while and is now on the resurection table. Your storry is the kind of Shit that keeps me going.
The Wizzard