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Honest
11-28-2003, 12:16 AM
Piled in three high stacks
Multi colored mountains with eye poking chrome
Leaning all diffrent directions
Await your false move
Three thousand pound hammers of doom

Sounds of flies buzzing, mexican music fills the air
Broken glass, puddles of oil, nintey weight smells
Carnival flavor, one dollar to enter..fun as a county fair.

All have a story ..too fast at a corner.
Too late and too much beer?
Photos of familys, Bibles, whiskey bottles and fast food bags
Magazines with titles like Juggs...Fat chicks with hot bods

Prizes await those who search under these hoods
All kina things...to build our hot rods
A race to beat the crusher
A race to find that part
A wrench and a dollar..
is all it takes to start

Careful where you reach..sharp edges covered in filth
Spiders and snakes..bugs that sting and fly
A bumper jack holds up the beast
Hoods propped like bear traps
This place can kill a guy

The coach is out front
Burritos on sale...three for a dollar
Only the brave get red sauce on the side
They said they were beef.....
But I think they lied.
LFFG
HC

Tman
11-28-2003, 12:20 AM
Nice poem man, wheres that loot? http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif

flt-blk
11-28-2003, 01:50 AM
Nice Poem,
You been painting without a mask again??
TZ

Rocky
11-28-2003, 02:01 AM
Back slowly away from the keyboard, Charley

Sailor
11-28-2003, 03:39 AM
So the poet is writing again, huh? Nice.

warpigg
11-28-2003, 03:47 AM
knowbody writes poems anymore

Skate Fink
11-28-2003, 06:33 AM
........you been hangin' with GERM???? http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif

C9
11-28-2003, 08:22 AM
Nice one Honest.

Haven't seen an Honest bit of prose for a while.
You are an artist with words....

quickrod
11-28-2003, 09:31 AM
honest,kool poem and all,but you gotta remember its puff puff pass,not puff puff puff puff puff.........puff.

Johnny Ace
11-28-2003, 12:07 PM
Hey Honest Chollie...thanks for the kool nitecap!
Try to hear what HC done laid on ya, only use Billy G's voice from "Heaven,Hell,or Houston"...musical background: "GraveyardII" by the Butthole Surfers....
HC is the word unto his own self...Germ is an entity unto his own,as well......Glad to be able to enjoy dem both....

Bass
11-28-2003, 05:36 PM
Honest Charley is my hero.

Some of you guys should try not being so close-minded.

wingnutz
11-28-2003, 08:07 PM
At least these poems are more readable than Germ's whatevers...??? http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/confused.gif http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif

Elrod
11-28-2003, 08:10 PM
Great poem man! Was that inspired by a recent find?