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Fat Hack
05-08-2004, 10:40 AM
Not to step on our buddy, Roger's toes, but I thought I'd share one with ya, too...here's Part One!


The music ran through his head as he walked with a purposeful stride along the busy roadway. He'd always kept a fast pace, finding it hard to walk slowly at all...and today he made no effort to curb his speed. He was iron willed and determined...a man on a mission!

Soft. twangy acoustic guitars echoed in his mind as he made his way along the grassy roadside that early Summer morning. A country song, though a relatively obscure one, kept playing on the jukebox in his mind. Tanya Tucker's unmistakeable voice cut in after the short musical intro...

"With a .38 tucked out of sight,
In a hopped up Ford on a Saturday night,
He was burnin' rubber halfway to Waco..."

It was no .38 he carried with him, though...and he wasn't headed for Waco. The flip-top office supply paper organizer swinging in his right hand between his forearm and hip contained some blank paper, a couple of pens, a few pictures of family and friends, a Michigan license plate, an old keychain with a tattered black and white yearbook photo of the only girl that had ever truly loved him...and a gas powered pellet pistol that bore a superficial resemblence to the popular Colt Model 1911 .45 caliber pistols and their copies. That folder, and the twenty dollar bill in his jeans pocket was all that he had decided to take with him on this fateful day.

He'd always had a knack for reflexive action, and he'd practiced the "drop & draw" method a hundred times in his basement earlier that morning. He was confident that he could flip his fingers upward beneath the folder, then quickly whip his hand into a fluid rise and flick the untied flap open with his thumb as he snatched the pistol and brought it to bear on target while the folder fell to the ground. After twenty five consecutive successful repetitions, he knew he had it down. Gunslinger cool and blindingly quick...the element of surprise would compensate for his weapon's lack of deadly ballistic power if it came down to showtime. He never broke a sweat once.

The hopped up Ford was the other half of the equation. Taken from him the night before, he was on his way to get it back. It wasn't much to brag about, a faded dull white 1969 Mustang coupe with a warmed over 302 cubic inch engine, but it was HIS car, and the bastards that took it from him weren't going to keep him from reclaiming it...one way or another. With a burning anger rising up from within him, he knew he could walk in there and strike with speed and precision before they realized what was happening. He'd formulated a few different plans, and had re-conned the location several hours earlier under cover of the night.

The impound lot opened at ten o'clock every morning, and by ten thirty, he'd planned to be well on his way. It was coming up on 9:45am as he cut across the overgrown field to come up from the rear of the lot...allowing him cover of the brush to get in close and undetected. He'd need to make a quick survey of the fenced-in lot in the light of day before enacting whichever one of three plans he'd incorporate to pull this caper off.

Plan One was the best bet...safest and least likely to get anybody hurt. That one called for just marching in there and driving the car out of the front gate. Simple, direct and effective...so long as no one tried to stop him.

Plan Two was a bit more daring, but if the car was still on the back of the wrecker as it had been when he'd scoped the lot hours earlier...it would involve stealing the wrecker and releasing the car once he was a safe distance away. The drivers generally left the keys in the trucks inside of the lot, he'd seen evidence to that fact earlier as he watched through binoculars in the darkness. The glint of the keys dangling from the ignition as the driver jumped out of his truck to check in at the office then head home.

Then there was Plan Three. Total Outlaw. Bust in there, surprise the clerk and the one or two drivers that would be inside the office, then force them into the back room and tie them up with phone cords or whatever was available. Bar the door and get away while buying himself some time until the employess got free or were discovered by someone. He regarded Plan Three as a Last Resort...but was committed to the task, and would exercise ice cold conviction in carrying out his Plan.

Then there was the dog to deal with. A large, bushy Shepherd-mix that patrolled the lot freely at night, and was chained to a post near the office by day. His chain allowed him some freedom of movement, but he couldn't reach the office door if he was tied up as he normally was during business hours. The fresh Co2 cartridge and full clip of pellets would hopefully discourage the dog from any rash heroics, but he didn't feel that the mutt would pose a big threat. He'd made his aquaintence the night before.

He'd met the dog at the back fence area when he'd crept in close the previous night for a look. He'd expected there to be some sort of guard dog, and wasn't alarmed by the discovery. He'd brought three dog biscuits with him, and had the mutt's full attention and loyalty within seconds. Some vicious watchdog indeed!

In the daylight, the lot looked dusty, open and vulnerable. The dog was chained up and resting quietly in the shade. The Mustang had been taken off of the wrecker and parked in the front row opposite the office door. The front gate was left wide open and unguarded. He breathed a slight sigh of relief. This would be easy. Tanya's voiced drifted through the verses of the song once more...

"Destination, liquor store,
And though he'd never robbed one before,
He'd made up his mind to do it,
Then he'd lay low..."

Rising from his crouch in the brush, he strolled around the fence towards the gate and walked past the sign that read "Police Impound". The dog lifted it's head as it's tail wagged happily. He smiled at the animal, then turned and opened the office door.

Inside sat one lady lazily shuffling paperwork at a desk behind the counter. The restroom door was closed and the faint sound of the vent fan running could be heard. One driver, and he'd likely be in there a few minutes at least. As the lady lifted her eyes to greet him, he spoke quickly and clearly. "White Mustang, brought in last night.", he said more like a statement, but still directed as a question.

She blinked at the stranger's sudden and direct appearance. A tall young man wearing a black jacket, white shirt and mirrored sunglasses. She'd later remark that he looked very non-descript and casual...no distinguishing features. "Sure, it's outside", she answered somewhat slowly. "Are you the owner...come to pay the fines and get it out?", she asked blankly.

"Left my wallet in the glovebox", the stranger stated. "Need to get it, if that's okay."

The woman shrugged, still not quite sure what to make of this curt youngster standing before her with the organizer pouch on the counter in front of him. Probably contained his insurance and registration paperwork, she assumed. His hand was resting on the flap as if ready to open it and produce the required doccumentation upon request. "Yeah...go on outside and have a look.", she replied finally.

He turned and was out the door almost before she could draw her next breath. He'd snatched the folder and taken it with him. She pondered whether or not she should get up and start the sign-out process...he'd probably be back in as soon as he'd fetched his billfold from the car.

Walking out of the office, his car was directly in front of him. Backed into place with the grille just a few quick paces away. The woman inside had seemed a bit aloof, not quite at her sharpest yet this morning. That could work to his advantage. He withdrew the spare key taped inside of his sleeve as he arrived at the driver's door.

His motions were quick and neat. He opened the door, slipped into the seat and closed it quickly. His hand went for the ignition switch in the dash, only to find that the key had been left in it! He flipped the spare key into a half fist while turning the key in the switch with his thumb and forefinger. He turned it to "ignition", then paused a moment.

The office door was still closed, and nobody was in the window facing him. He pumped the gas pedal twice, then turned the key to "start". The engine fired instantly, and he worked the throttle with a practiced touch while dropping the shifter into "Drive" and steering for the open gate. His faithful steed had not let him down, it had started quickly and didn't hessitate as he accelerated out of the gate with the rear tires slinging loose sand and gravel. Turning onto the side street, he headed for the main road. A quick right hander and he opened the throttle and sped away. The dual exhaust roared as he picked up speed. He was free.

"All he thought he needed
Was a little bit of cash to go on,
A good set of wheels,
And the gas to get back home..."

The song continued to circulate in his head as his heart beat faster and his eyes became aware of every car and person he passed. He watched out for cops and scanned his rearview mirror for any sign of a tail. About five miles down the road, he turned off onto a residential street and pulled into an alley behind a liquor store.

Leaving the engine running, he quickly grabbed a screwdriver from the glovebox and slipped the license plate out of the folder on the passenger's seat. Opening his door, he stepped to the rear of the car and quickly attatched the plate. It was an expired plate from a dead project car back home in the garage, but it looked better than no plate at all, so he tightened it down, then hopped back into the car and drove off.

Th PLan had worked. He'd gotten his car back, but was now unsure exactly what his next move would be. The police would no doubt be looking for him at home, so going there wasn't an option. He approached the westbound freeway and took the on ramp. He'd hit the road...get out of state, and figure out his next move from there.

He drove for a while, watching out for cops and skillfully 'hiding' in traffic whenever he saw a State Trooper going the opposite way. He wasn't sure just how fast or how far word would travel to other law enforcement agencies, but he kept on his toes as if he were now officially Public Enemy Number One. No sense in getting careless at this point!

He pulled into a gas station about fifty miles up the freeway. The car was easy on fueal at easy freeway speeds, but he only had twenty dollars to his name, had to spend it wisely. Parking near one of the pumps, he walked inside, still taking note of every car and person within sight.

Placing a bottle of Pepsi on the counter along with the twenty dollar bill, he told the clerk to give him nine dollars on pump four. That would nearly fill the tank and carry him quite a ways with ten dollars left. He'd make up the rest as he went.

He gassed up the car, and popped the top off of the soda bottle using an opener near the pump. The sun had warmed things up quickly, so he took his jacket off and tossed it into the back seat. Starting the engine, he steered back onto the freeway, headed west...towards his uncertain future.


TO BE CONTINUED !!! http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif

Paul
05-08-2004, 11:44 AM
hahaha, fun read Hack!

do we hafta wait till next Sat. to get more?

I want it now!

Paul

nekroman
05-08-2004, 12:00 PM
Good read, either your very creative or you have too much time on your hands.

SanDiegoJoe
05-08-2004, 02:49 PM
good one.

bufordtjustice
05-08-2004, 03:06 PM
Nice job.
Greg

Fat Hack
05-08-2004, 08:15 PM
Part Two...

She couldn't believe what she was hearing. Surely, there was no way that the young stranger had just taken off with a car out of the police impound lot that she was in charge of, but he had...and she knew it. Yelling for the wrecker driver to get out of the bathroom, she went to the window and saw the vacant spot where the white Mustang had been parked scant seconds earlier. The dust settling in the lot and the tire tracks it had left were the only signs that it had been there at all.

Stumbling from the restroom, the driver asked what all the commotion was as he tucked his shirt into his faded blue work pants. It was too early in the day to be getting bitched at, he thought.

"Some guy just drove outta here with that Mustang!", she barked, still not wanting to believe it herself. "Just drove it on outta the front GATE...like he was late for church or sumthin'!!", she added dramatically.

The lanky tow truck jockey pushed his hat up and scratched his head while eyeballing the box of donuts on her desk. "No shit!", he said with casual amusement in his voice. "Was it HIS car?".

She turned and glared at him. "How in the Hell do I know?", she screeched. "He didn't sign me no autographs or leave a business card! He SAID it was his...but I don't know!". She lit a cigarette and began to tremble. SHE'D have to be the one to call the police and tell them what had happened, for the second time in less than two weeks. They would NOT be impressed, and she knew she'd take the heat for it.

"Maybe he'll bring it back?", she asked as she stared out the window. She directed the question more to herself than to the driver now pinching a custard donut from her desk. It was more of a WISH than it was a question.

Chewing half the donut at once, the driver kidded, "Oh sure...maybe he's just TEST DRIVING it to see if he wants it or not...might come back and take another for a spin until he finds one he likes!". He laughed a little at his own dumb wit, nearly choking on his breakfast as he did.

"This ain't no joking matter!", she yelled, turning to look at him sharply. "I'M the one that's gonna catch Hell over this shit...and you think it's FUNNY?! Well guess what, Mister...YOU were here TOO, so I'm gonna make damn sure they chew YOUR ass out along with mine!".

Looking genuinely hurt and confused, he shrugged and quipped, "What did I do? I was taking a SHIT for cryin' out loud!". Sensing her distraction, he reached for another donut.

She went back to gazing out the window and half talking to herself again. "Well, you coulda tried to STOP him is all...instead of sitting in there with Miss June pinching a loaf!".

Chomping into his second donut, he scoffed, "Oh yeah...I'm gonna come running out of there cock, balls and ding-a-ling to try and stop some lunatic from racing outta here in a souped up Mustang after using my psychic powers to know that he was out there stealing it in the FIRST place! Get real!".

She laughed nervously despite her feeling of panic at the thought of the dopey driver chasing after the stranger with his pants around his ankles and this month's Playboy flying up behind him as he went. "You shoulda been out HERE, Stupid...then maybe you coulda DONE something!". She was still chuckling under her breath as she spoke. She KNEW she had to place the call, but dreaded doing so. Yelling at the driver, trying to pass off some of the blame seemed like a perfectly acceptable way to kill the time while she built up the courage to phone the cops.

The two of them spent the next several minutes bickering and "what-if-ing", then the call went out to the police dispatch. They'd send a car to take the report and make an effort to intercept the likely perp at his home address. The dispatch operator would joke to the desk sergeant behind him that the idiots at the impound lot had let another one go, and they'd both have a giggle at the whole deal.

The police cruiser rolled up to the office at the impound lot roughly forty five minutes after the stranger had made off with the car. The lieutennant was less than cordial when he entered the office and demanded to know just what the Hell had happened. He stood there grilling the two witnesses for several long minutes, then helped himself to a donut. "What a way to start a perfectly lovely Summer day!" he griped to himself as he bit into the sprinkled chocolate treat. "Bet they forgot to put COFFEE on this morning, too", he thought as he privately reviewed his opinion of the two shaken employees' competence. Catching a glimpse of the burbling Mr Coffee maker in the corner, he was glad that at least they had done THAT much right...donuts without coffee is just plain STUPID!

TO BE CONTINUED!

wingnutz
05-08-2004, 09:22 PM
"AND...???" come on..., "part three" and quit messing with us!!

bufordtjustice
05-08-2004, 10:14 PM
lol....we need the rest, come with it already!!
Greg

RileyRacing
05-08-2004, 10:59 PM
So, which one were ya, the kid, the girl or the tow truck driver? http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif

Good read, look forward to the rest!

Jay

scoop
05-08-2004, 11:06 PM
Good start,quit teasing!!!!

Fat Hack
05-09-2004, 11:28 AM
Conclusion!.....

His thoughts played out over the backdrop of the engine's steady hum at freeway speeds. A Dire Straits tape was softly providing a musical score courtesy of the Pioneer cassette deck, and he sipped from the Pepsi bottle as he drove...trying to formulate a plan for his immediate future.

Stealing the car had been the EASY part...between the wide open front gate and the lack of effort on the part of the lady in the office and whoever was in the bathroom, it had hardly been a challenge at all. It began to gnaw at him that ANYONE could have stolen his car, or any other running vehicle out of the lot just as easily. The idiots left the keys in the cars and the gate unguarded, practically INVITING theft!

Putting his growing anger aside for the moment, he pondered what his next move should be. How far could he really expect to go with a tank of gas and ten dollars cash? To step back and think about it made the whole situation seem almost comical, but he was in no mood to laugh about it right then, he needed to come up with a startegy for survival here!

He had the gun...it could probably fool someone enough to pull off a quick robbery or two...grab enough cash to get him settled somewhere and look for work...start a new life in another state.

"Yeah", he laughed to himself "Go from clean record to armed robbery in one day! Maybe use that new skill on a JOB application somewhere...maybe the MOB is hiring?!". He really didn't want to start a one man crimewave, and it really wasn't in his nature to openly break the law or threaten anyone. "Stealing" his own car back was one thing, but taking money at gunpoint was yet another. He wasn't sure that he was ready to make that leap just yet.

He could always sell the car if he had to. It was a clean, strong running Mustang...not a Mach I or Boss, but a 69 'Stang anyway. He could offer it up at a bargain price...maybe five hundred or so and live off that for a while.

Selling the car was better than LOSING it completely over some technicality that wasn't much more than legalized extorsion on the part of the insurance companies and the State Of Michigan, at least he'd have some quick cash to show for it. Regarding this as his best plan, he pulled off into a rest area and backed the car into a spot so that the expired plate was facing the wooded area across a small grassy plot behind the parking lot.

Pulling a piece of paper out of the folder, and taking pen in hand, he began to do some quick figuring. He wrote "$500" at the top of the page, then began to make estimates as to how long he could live on that amount without a car while he looked for a job in some strange town. Being a young man of 21, he was fit and able to do almost anything...he had a few years experience selling auto parts, and he was handy with the tools, too. He could make a decent, simple living if he could find work at a parts store or garage somewhere. If he busted his hump, got a job within a couple of days and sold the car, he could make it, he thought.

He got out of the car to stretch his legs and to take a quick trip to the restroom. Pausing to look at the map on the wall of the building, he noted the "You are HERE!" arrow and allowed his eyes to follow a route that would take him into rural Indiana, or maybe double back a bit and head south into Kentucky or Tennessee, an easy one-day trip in one of two different directions. He liked what he had seen of Kentucky and Tennessee in the past on family vacations, and Indiana was a big, friendly place, too. He could be happy either way.

Finishing his business in the restroom, he veered towards the vending machine and began to reach for some change. A fresh, cold pop sounded good about now, but he stopped to remind himself that he was a fugitive living on a very limited budget at the moment...this was no vacation he was on!

Still, he gave in to the whim...finding sixty cents in his pocket and feeding it into the machine. The glass bottle landed with a solid "thunk" in the receiving area of the device, and he marveled at the fact that they never seemed to break. Popping the top with the opener screwed to the side of the machine and letting the cap fall into the box attatched below it, he strolled back towards the car.

There it was...his latest "Baby". He'd named the car "Trigger" after the fabled horse and western hero sidekick, and he was quite proud of it. Lifting the hood, he looked over the engine and instinctively went about checking the oil and fluids while performing a visual inspection of the hoses, belts, filters and such. He knew everything was up to snuff, because he built and maintained the car himself...just hadn't gotten 'round to getting plates and insurance for it yet! Stupid, yes...but he'd elected to spend his money making the car run right and look good...thinking he could skirt the law for a week or two. He'd been wrong.

The cops claimed it was a routine traffic stop, although he'd not been speeding, nor had he broken any laws. The car had headers and duals, but wasn't loud enough to draw attention to itself under normal driving conditions, he'd just been on his way to a friend's house in a neighboring town when they pulled him over.

Remembering the exact moment (Hell, it had only been YESTERDAY!), he recalled fighting the urge to nail the gas pedal and run right then. He'd decided against it, of course. Trying to evade the police in a crowded neighborhhod was simply INVITING disaster, so he pulled over and bit his lip as they towed his pride and joy away.

The night before, he had been brooding and formulating his plan to get the car back HIS way...to teach those cops a LESSON, he'd reasoned. Freshly inspired from watching James Spader in "Tuff Turf", he grabbed his pellet gun, tucked it into his waistband outlaw style, threw on his jacket and walked out into the still night air to recon the two possible impound lots in the area, his car would be at one of them.

He'd walked several miles that night, a lone dark clad figure quietly sneaking around one lot, then over to the next, four good miles away. The walk hadn't even phased him, he was too burned up inside to notice. Besides, he'd made a habit out of walking up to 20 miles per day in the Summers he'd spent up near Tobermory, Canada at Grandma and Grandpa's cottage...a few measly miles now was no sweat. He was young and in perfect health.

Coming back to the moment, he stepped back and gently shut the hood, hearing it latch securely. Slowly, he opened the door and slid behind the wheel. Starting the engine, he sat and listened to it's steady, low rumbling idle as he made a last minute decision as to which way he'd go.

Looking up, he saw the State Trooper take the exit road and slow as he entered the parking lot. The boxy little Dodge wearing the unmistakeable blue of the Michigan State Police, and headed right towards him. His hand went to the shifter, and his foot rested on the gas pedal.

Fully expecting the cop to hit the rotating overhead light and block him in at the last second, the young 'outlaw' eased the shifter into "Reverse" and placed his other foot on the brake...he could nail the gas and back across the lawn and pull a picture-perfect "Rockford" in the wet grass he thought, and race the Trooper's Dodge towards the on ramp and outrun him on the top end...maybe.

The cop car slowed slightly, and the Trooper's head turned to face the kid in the Mustang. This was it, this was "Go Time", the kid thought. Easing up on the brake slightly, the Mustang inched backwards as the driver prepared to nail the throttle. The Trooper came to almost a dead stop in front of him...staring straight at him through his sunglasses.

"Nice car!", the cop yelled with a slight nod and a quick grin. "Had one like it back in high school...351 Windsor.", he added. His cruiser had come to a stop directly in front of the little Ford.

Gathering his composure quickly, the kid smiled back and shouted "Thanks! Just picked this one up myself...302 four barrel." Slipping the shifter into "Neutral", he gunned it a couple of times for the cop's benefit.

Nodding and grinning, the Trooper shot back "Sounds good!". Then, giving a 'thumbs up' gesture, he steered the police car into a parking spot in front of the building and got out to head inside.

Breathing a heavy sigh of relief, the kid eased the Mustang into gear and drove off easily, but quickly. Obviously word of this "Dangerous Outlaw" hadn't made Statewide reports yet, so he was kinda safe, for the moment. He drove on...sipping his Pepsi, listening to the music, enjoying the drive, and just happy to be alive.

He took an exit ramp a few miles up the freeway and pulled into a fast food joint. He'd pretty much made up his mind what to do, and figured he'd treat himself to a good meal before he headed for his destiny. It's easier to go forth on a full stomach, anyway...so he ordered and sat down to eat and think some more.

When he'd finished, he hopped back into the car and pulled out of the lot, heading back to the freeway. Slowing a bit, he reassured himself, and took the Eastbound ramp.

The drive back towards his hometown seemed to go quickly, and he wondered exactly what would be waiting for him. He assumed that there would likely be some jail time, maybe probation being a first offense with nobody getting hurt and no high speed chases involved, and he was willing to accept that. He'd made the tough choice this morning to thumb his nose at the System and take his chances on the road...running from the cops as needed...and head off to some romantic new beginning elsewhere.

But, he couldn't do it. Couldn't just leave like that...no good-byes to friends and family, no letters, no explanation. This wasn't some teen movie, this was the real world, this was his LIFE. He had to go back, face the music and pay the piper. It wouldn't be the End of the World, he could take whatever they threw at him. He'd made his point and enjoyed his little victory and Freedom Run, now he'd settle up with the Man and take his lumps.

Still watching for roadblocks, helicopters, tanks and napalm attacks, he guided the trusty little Mustang back to the lot where he had liberated it several hours earlier, and drove it in through the STILL wide open front gate. He backed it in where it had sat before, shut the ignition off, then let out a breath and headed for the office once more.

The dog raised it's head and wagged it's tail as he approached, and the kid smiled weakly at him. "Hope I handle captivity as well as you do, Pal!", he said softly to the panting dog as he reached for the knob on the office door.

"AAAAHHHGHH! I don't BELIEVE this!", the woman screamed as he walked inside and placed the keys on the counter. "NOBODY is gonna believe this!", she added aloud as she shook her head and laughed partly in relief, and partly in disbelief at the absurdity of the day's events.

"You need to take care of these cars a little better", he said "Anyone could just walk in here and take one...and not everyone would bring them BACK, either." He was still trying to be James Spader cool, but was probably slipping into Michael J Fox quirky as he attempted to mask his guilt with sarcasm and a casual air of indifference.

The tow truck driver shook his head and dialed the phone. There was an awkward exchange of words within the small office between the kid, the lady and the wrecker jockey over the next few moments as questions were asked and each tried to act their part while privately feeling an overwhelming sense of relief that it was all over, and that things were winding down to their rightfull conclusion. The police were on their way, and soon this matter would just be a wild story to tell about a not-so-ordianry day in the lives of three key players.

The Lieutennant walked in and loomed over the kid, stone sour expression on his face and glaring down at him through his cop shades. Big arms folded across his chest, he boomed to the young scofflaw. "So, what do you have to say for yourself?", he demanded.

They each handled their role appropriately, the seasoned cop grilling the kid, and the kid breaking down from defiant and cocky to shaking and sorry. They were each trying to be tough, but they saw through each other easily.

Twenty minutes later, amid nervous laughter and chatter from the lady, a few clever quips from the wrecker driver, some lecturing from the cop and a volley of appologies from the kid...the situation was resolved. All that the kid had really been "guilty" of was skipping out on the fines he owed the City and the Impound Lot, and he'd returned their collateral unharmed. The cop agreed to let him off with a stern warning, and told him to come back and do things the RIGHT way next time! Then, turning his attention to the lady and the wrecker driver, he scolded them for not minding the gate, and for leaving the keys in the cars. They suddenly became equally as appologetic and promised to change their practices right away.

When it was all but over, the kid looked meekly at the cop and asked, "Is it okay if I grab my jacket out of the car before I go?"

The cop reeled with laughter. "That's how this whole mess STARTED, isn't it? You went out to get something from your car...and here we are!"

The kid smiled a little in spite of himself.

"Well, okay, Kid...", the officer said "Go for it! My car is blocking the gate with the keys in it...you're a quick one...MAKE MY DAY!". The room echoed with laughter as the kid opened the door.

"Maybe next time, Sir," the kid replied, "I like the element of SURPRISE, ya know!". With that, he strolled over to his car, snatched up the jacket and walked towards the gate. The cop, the lady and the wrecker driver were all poised in the doorway watching as he paused at the driver's door on the cop car.

Putting his shades back on and looking at the police car, he turned back to the three people watching and yelled "How fast will it go?" with a jerk of his head towards the police cruiser. The James Spader cool was back in his voice and a reckless smile punctuated the joke.

"Not fast ENOUGH, Sonny!", the lietennant answered with an equally big grin as he patted the butt of his gun. "Not fast enough to outrun THIS!", he added with conviction. They all enjoyed a last little laugh, and the kid turned, flipped his jacket over his shoulder, and began the long walk home into the lenthening shadows...and into his uncertain future.

Da END!!! http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif

40StudeDude
05-09-2004, 12:10 PM
Not bad...not bad at all, Hack!

Just to give you a little insight into my mind...I listen to lyrics as well...interesting characters dominate songs and I just add to them to come up with a story...did you read my story "The Song Is Over"? That came from the lyrics of a CW song about Montgomery, Alabama...

But just so you know...the story was good, as was the ending...I wondered why some young kid with a couple of hot rod projects at home would decide on a life of crime...morals simply got in his way...as it should be...

Let's see another...
R-

Paul
05-09-2004, 12:23 PM
thanks again Hack,

you ever have anything published?

if not, you should.

Paul

Fat Hack
05-09-2004, 12:43 PM
Thanks for the kind words Roger and Paul! http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif

No, never had anything serious published...beyond a couple stray stories and tech tips in a non-automotive magazine a couple years ago. I'm no professional writer!

I read all the stories you post on da HAMB, Rog...great stuff...a nice and welcomed break from some of the stuff that goes on here...VERY happy to see the Friday Night Read back most weekends!

Yeah, that silly kid in the story was always a flighty one...a music lover, movie buff and hopeless romantic! Maybe SOMEDAY he'll get his head screwed on straight and do something with his life...but for now he can be found touting the viability of oddball 70s drivetrains and picking up empty returnable beverage containers to finance his latest Mess as he goes about his job search!

(Word has it that his Dad bailed him out of the Mustang snafu and he got the car back legally...sold it down the road and bought a Firebird to drive while he built a big block Torino. He dumped the pellet gun in a trash can along I-94 somewhere along his route that day and took note of the fact that the gate at the impound lot has since been kept closed following his little caper.)

The Summer of 89! http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/cool.gif

roadstar
05-09-2004, 01:55 PM
I really enjoyed that.

Now I have to go do something in the garage.

SanDiegoJoe
05-09-2004, 02:04 PM
I really liked that - and the pix that you have done up... I do some stuff in that style myself...

SanDiegoJoe
05-09-2004, 02:04 PM
another

bufordtjustice
05-09-2004, 02:32 PM
Nice job man!
Greg

Fat Hack
05-09-2004, 05:38 PM
Thanks...I thought the trippy pictures gave off a sort of surreal, flashback, dreamlike vibe! http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/cool.gif

(Plus, they're fun ta do!! http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif)

Fat Hack
12-12-2004, 01:29 PM
Ha Ha Ha...I was sifting through some junk in a drawer this morning and found the spare set of keys to that old Mustang...brought the memory flooding back!

(Damn, was that REALLY 15 years ago??? http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/ooo.gif http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/crazy.gif http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/laugh.gif)

Hot Rod To Hell
12-12-2004, 02:00 PM
Ha HA! You're my HERO Greg! http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif

DIRTYT
12-12-2004, 07:52 PM
i thought u only stole the monte carlo outa the inpound lot http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif haha full of suprises. im glad this got brought back up i missed it the first time.

BELLM
12-12-2004, 10:49 PM
Thanks for sharing, good story.

Fat Hack
12-13-2004, 08:28 AM
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i thought u only stole the monte carlo outa the inpound lot http://www.jalopyjournal.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif haha full of suprises. im glad this got brought back up i missed it the first time.

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No, no NO! The Monte Carlo was taken out of the impound lot LEGALLY...I just got all the thief's tools, personal items, weapons and "assorted paraphanalia" along with it! Then, the inept cop (who failed to search the stolen car!) calls me up to ask if I'd give the poor kid his shit back! I told him that the kid knew where he stole the car from, just have him come knock on the door and ask in person!!!